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WinterChef's avatar

Olivia , again .. beautiful!

Dizzying Speed of a Cup of Tea's avatar

Olivia, this really touched me. It felt simple and real, like something you don’t just read but step into.

These lines especially stayed with me:

“I become the douglas fir,

the salt and sea,

allow me to lose myself,

in the storm spiral hours,

where there’s nothing missing.”

They reminded me of Metamorphoses—how Ovid wrote about gods becoming trees. That same quiet merging is here.

Thank you for this.

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